

TH
TALEN HAMILTON
MEDIA STUDIES A LEVEL
8098
Synopsis
A boy has no social skills because of the neglect from hid mother and no father (father ran away at birth). The whole film is based on him trying to create new friends and possibley more in time. He goes through many social networking sites. Ends in a blacked out figure arriving at his door, a cliffhanger.
Improvements
- Needs more detail ; who, what, why, when, how.
- Where?
- Not very long short on specifics.
Draft One
Draft Two
Simon, mother of Annabel, finds himself waking up, like a normal day. There will be a close up shot of his phone, while the alarm is ringing, low key lighting as it is morning.Scenes of him getting dressed explain the situation further. The involvement of a girl on a social media site allows him to interact with another gender, like he has never before. He wants to pursue this conversation with this female he has just met, and overtime take it to a new stage if he is ever ready. Thus he continues his journey with the female as he is living his day to day life, going to school and coming home. This will continue throughout numerous locations, ultimately the main place is his home. He eventually meets with the character 'Shygirl108' however things don't go exactly to plan for him as he is ambushed by a gang, lots of frames will be used and cuts of Simon running. The film should be left on a cliffhanger.
Improvements
- Source of light?
- Higher definition
- Shygirl becomes creepy and anoxious?
- Character needs defining
- Example?
- Remove doubt.
- Add detail
Draft Three
Simon, mother of Annabel, finds himself waking up, like a normal day. There will be a close up shot of his phone, while the alarm is ringing, low key lighting as it is morning.Scenes of him getting dressed explain the situation further, such as putting on shoes, coat and also sweater. The involvement of a girl on a social media site allows him to interact with another gender known as 'Shygirl108', like he has never before. He wants to pursue this conversation with this female he has just met, as he feels it could lead to the development of social skills and he may be able to approach more people with confidence, and overtime take it to a new stage if he is ever ready. Thus he continues his journey with the female as he is living his day to day life, going to school and coming home. This will continue throughout numerous locations, such as London and Surrey however ultimately the main location is his based in Carshalton. He eventually meets with the character 'Shygirl108' however things don't go exactly to plan for him as he is ambushed by a gang, she has been playing with his mind with the use of love, in which she later realises she has done wrong and has developed emotional feelings for Simon, the boy who once couldn't talk to anyone, lots of frames will be used and cuts of Simon running. The film should be left on a cliffhanger.